Obamas speech assessment

Content	Mark
Quality of ideas – depth; originality; reasoning	9/10
Presentation of ideas – clarity; organization; attention device; thesis; appropriate finish; time limit	9/10
Quality of English – vividness; variety; grammar	8/10
Delivery
Voice – volume; pace; tone; enunciation; confidence	10/10
Physical – poise; eye contact; gestures	10/10
Total: 50 marks	46/50

He has a good word choice fit for a highschooler student actually good for a middle school student. He didn’t use any hard works everything was understandable, the speech flow was outstanding so was the structure.

He had a confident voice, relaxed posture, doesn’t like that he is prepared for it, it seems like a normal conversation. 

He looks towards the left, then right, and then middle acknowledging almost everyone sitting in the audience.

This was interesting, I don’t have the authority to critique it but it think this was not his best speech albeit, good speech.

Hamlet

Dear anonymous,

From what i can see your situation is really complicated but you should understand that eye for and eye does not make sense here. Murder doesn not always mean murder.
Revenge can be accesible even if you confront him and the athorities.
IF you murder him you will be hurting your mother.
forgive and forget
love
abby

Hamlet

Dear Abby,

My soul objective is not to let anyone know who i am but what i can tell you is that im in problem right now and my problem is that my father died. Its was a big shocker to me since he was murdered in our garden. Another shocker came to me when my uncle married my mother, so basically shes my mother and aunt simultaneously. 

The biggest shocker came to me when i saw my fathers ghost, he told me that he was murdered by my uncle and he ordered me to take revenge but not to hurt my mother as hell will prevail.

Me, Myself and I

My name is Laveeza. I have lived in Lahore for most of my life. I have two  brothers and a younger sister. My oldest brother has completed his law degree from the University of Buckingham, he graduated with distinctions. My other brother is in college right now , He is presently studying. My younger sister is studying at Learning Alliance at the moment.

The first thing people thing people think about me when they see me is that i'm arrogant. But a wise man once said "Don't Judge a book by its cover" therefore when you get to know me its different. I prefer to say that i care for my friends. I care for them even if its effecting me in any way.

I plan to go to England for my degree in Fashion design and alongside that i want to take photography classes aswell.