Sunday, September 26, 2010

Obamas speech assessment


Content
Mark
Quality of ideas – depth; originality; reasoning
9/10
Presentation of ideas – clarity; organization; attention device; thesis; appropriate finish; time limit
9/10
Quality of English – vividness; variety; grammar
8/10
Delivery
Voice – volume; pace; tone; enunciation; confidence
10/10
Physical – poise; eye contact; gestures
10/10
Total: 50 marks
46/50



He has a good word choice fit for a highschooler student actually good for a middle school student. He didn’t use any hard works everything was understandable, the speech flow was outstanding so was the structure.

He had a confident voice, relaxed posture, doesn’t like that he is prepared for it, it seems like a normal conversation. 

He looks towards the left, then right, and then middle acknowledging almost everyone sitting in the audience.
This was interesting, I don’t have the authority to critique it but it think this was not his best speech albeit, good speech.

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